better than I could ever do
but dude, listen to any european power metal band to be blown away.
better than I could ever do
but dude, listen to any european power metal band to be blown away.
Dude... This is a joke song, it's supposed to be shit!
its a looop
Like the title says, its a loop. Its got only like 3 things going on though and it doesnt capture my attention fully. It could be made better with more bass and maybe some softer synths
Mmk :D
I've heard worse
This isnt as shitty as you seem to think it is. It's pretty standard heavy metal. You should add more variety though. It seems you only have 1 guitar, 1 bass?, and drums. Throw some secondary guitar lines in there so you have one guitar free to do solos and melodies.
Cheers man. Yeah there are two guitar tracks in there at some points, but most of the time they're both playing the same riff. There's only one bass though yeah, I'm very lazy! Like I said though, this was nothing special, I keep trying to record a full song but I don't seem to have the patience to do it these days!!
Thanks for the words mate!
yeaaah
That beat is so punchy, i think i might have a black eye. Well done sir.
goo goo gah jewb!
Thats the best kind of black eye mister mechanical engineer man!
Usually I aim my punchy audio sex machine for the ears, but sometimes I miss and hit peoples eye. My bad!
bring up the bass!
this sounds awesome, but my brain is telling me that it needs more bass. there wasnt a legit bassline as far as i could tell, other than the beginning. Also, I want to hear more of the kick. The synths are smothering it!
I would like to see how this turns out when its done though....
Hey m8!
Sry for the long respond time :) been off doing things in the world,
Yes the kicks and bass are kinda low in this one, and i havent got the save on my HD :(
But maybe i can do a remix of the synth and melody in some other project,
Well i really appreciate your review and hope you will stick around :)
[KZ0N]
nice
it took a little while, but the song grew on me as it went on. I especially like the end. very epic
yup... thanks :)
some issues
No bassline for one. The song feels empty with no bottom end. Second, the synths are not mixed well. That one that comes in around 1:07 dominates the whole spectrum and isnt necessarily pleasant to listen to. Lastly, the parts were off key. You need to keep all of your notes in the same scale, otherwise it ends up sounding random and unpleasant. Its true that its possible to tastefully go offscale but it takes a lot of experience to know when is a good time to do it.
Hope this helps
Thank you.
zesty
You should definitely go full length on this one. It sounds awesome.
Thanks man! :D
nice
what DAW did you use for this? I have a hunch but I'm just curious
Thanks!!
alright
i think there needs to be more variation and random stuff thrown it. As it is its just like one thing for 16 measures, then another thing for another 16 measures, etc.
Maybe... but then again, maybe that's the point...
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